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He's referring to Gavin of course. Anyway..

Disappointed? Yeah me too. Sorry for the sketch quality I really wanted to make this full color like the audition. But I was having major issues with the script. I was literally re-writing up until last night. I never got a good story down which I think shows and in turn I waited too long to draw out the pages hoping that a story would come to me. Sorry for the let down :\ I will however tone the pages (like the first page) over the week if time permits.

Also, if you're curious about Akeyra I was going to put her in a side entry kind of thing along with a Brook side story too if I made it past the first round (which is unlikely. Visit Tick's page and see the epic ensue. They won it's not even a question) I'm also pretty sure I messed up Huitzi's personality. I took him for happy go lucky around friends or people like him, but badass serious when around those tricksy whites. Apologies if I got him or Akeyra wrong.

It was a shame I didn't get to draw Akeyra more though. She's damn fun to draw.

and now I can go to sleep. Wait what? I have to go to work!! D8


Akeyra (c) :icontickity-tock:
Huitzi (c) :iconunknown-person:
Clay (c) Me

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Fox7XD's avatar
what an epic entry indeed! awhhh, I can only image how much more epic it'd be if you got to finish it to how you'd want it to look (the dreaded deadlines take another victim) but over all I though your story was good as it was! :heart: both yours and Tickity/Unknown's were amazing reads!

;-; my comments are always late though; terribly sorry. (I look forward to your future comics though! X3 )